Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
×



Details

Submitted on
March 14, 2013
Image Size
1.5 MB
Resolution
1024×1331
Link
Thumb
Embed

Stats

Views
243 (1 today)
Favourites
7 (who?)
Comments
9
Downloads
14
×
a lady sitting by avaruus-apina a lady sitting by avaruus-apina
Still practising

Critiques and feedback are appreciated
Add a Comment:
 
:iconaudreve:
audreve Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2013
I love it!! Especially the lines on the face, because those are just right, which is crucial (especially with women, because you need to do thinner lines to give a softer aspect, as opposed to men)

Maybe in some areas you may want to do the lines going in one direction only, to give more volume and a greater contrast with the rest (kinda like how you did it with the face, btw). I was thinking of the flowers on her hat, but tbh, I can't see many more areas where you could have done that :)
Ah, yes, the top of her back, the white lines I assume you added after kind of cut the movement. (but not at the bottom of her dress)

Great job! :D
Reply
:iconavaruus-apina:
avaruus-apina Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Thanks. I'm constantly strugling with croshatching. It's so difficult to know when to stop adding new lines. I have to try what you suggested.
Reply
:iconaudreve:
audreve Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
I feel you… What you can do when you mess up, which happens, is to use a white gell pen to do some lines over it to soften them.
For example, this drawing I did was too dark in some areas (especially the face) so I did that: audreve.deviantart.com/art/My-…
Reply
:iconmadmagpie:
MadMagpie Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Kiva, kevyt ja tuo mieleen vanhat kuparipiirrokset 1800-luvulta. Onnistunut työ! (Vähän voisi tietty daamilla olla pitemmät ripset, niin olisi feminiinisempi, mutta mitäs pienistä!)
Reply
:iconavaruus-apina:
avaruus-apina Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Kiva, että mielyttää. Ripset ovat hankalia ainakin minulle. Tulee aina vedettyä överiksi, täytyy siis jatkaa harjoittelua.
Reply
:iconmadmagpie:
MadMagpie Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ripset ja kulmat OVAT hankalia. :)
Reply
:iconbesnglist:
besnglist Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2013
Looks superawesome! I'm no professionally educated artist, but I've noticed that hatching with white lines over the black, that digital allows us, confuses me, so I prefer myself linework based on black ob white only. But you seem to deal with it quite well, catching the light.
Reply
:icondragonbaze:
Dragonbaze Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2013   Traditional Artist
I was just about to tip Avaruus about your site, but then I saw you'd already commented. :P Anyways you're both super talanted!!!
Reply
:iconavaruus-apina:
avaruus-apina Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2013
I prefer only black linework also, but I figured to give it a try. over all I prefer traditional inking over digital because traditional is much more accurate. The thing is that i'm kinda lazy and draggin my lighttable and nibs out just for a quick study feels like too much work sometimes.
Reply
Add a Comment: